In the holidays the best day I had was going to the fun festival. There were heaps off free rides and my favourite ride was the Kamikaze. It was scary because I almost slipped out! It spins you up then it spins you down and some times it stays up in the air. That is when I almost slipped out. How freaky! My oldest brother, who is 23 came with me. The next ride I went on was the Rock n Roll. It is a ride where you have to hop in these circle things. Metal poles connect them together and they spin like a spin top does. It was awesome! The ride made me feel dizzy. After that I went for a feed . We had sandwiches which were nice. I liked a lot of the food that we had. There were heaps of lines for the other rides that I went on including the ride where you hop in these aeroplane seats and you are spun around in the air.
Hi Lukis
ReplyDeleteVery good peace of writing there,probably better than mine.I went to the free ride too.Awesome ayy.Kepp up the good work.:)
Hi Lukis i liked your writing. I liked it because you gave more detail about the rides you went on and you gave a clear picture about that day.
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Hi Lukis!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Whitney, I am a college student here in Mobile, Alabama. From the sounds of it, you had a wondrous time at the Fun Festival. We here also have a local fair where the Kamikaze happens to be one of my favorite rides as well! I am going to school to be a teacher and as part of my assignment we have been connected with your class to find out what we can about New Zealand. Also what your culture consists of and to stay updated with what you are doing in class! Please feel free to view and comment on my blog Whitney's Blog
Hi Lukis I like your story about the Fun Festival it sounds like you had fun on the Kamikaze and on the Rock n Roll. Who did you go with to the Fun Festival
ReplyDeleteHi Lukis how was the kamikaze, was it cool? I like the how you descired how you feel when you were on the kamikaze. By
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