Then we kept running down the we run around Mr S then run back through the breeze back on to the court.
When we first ran off most of the year sixes were sprinting.
I tried not to because that would be wasting all your energy so I decided to jog.
The as I got up to Mrs King she said “come on Lukis you can do it but don't sprint”.
When I circled around Mr s I ran into a traffic jam of people. But I managed to run on the grass but then there lots more people in the way. So I had to walk then as I got through a ran through the breeze door onto the court. We had to walk around the court.
Till we had to stretch. But if we talked we had to sit down.
Nice writing Lukis. It sure is a traffic jam at times when you kids run thats for sure. This is much better writing Lukis I want you to keep this standard up.
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